SwerveG - who run it

[SwerveG]

SoundClick artist: Mohammed T - Pyscadellic Hiphop, Spoken word.

let me know what you think

[Riot]

Feeding from listen:

Beat is nice, kind of got a U.K. twing to it.

Your flowing well over the beat, but your vocals are a little low.

Lyrics are nice, vocab. on lock as usual.

I think the hook needs work. There's no distinguishing between the verse and hook, so work on bringing it it and so people know what it is.

I like how you ended it, but your far from the worst emcee I've ever heard lol.

Overall it's not bad, little changes here and there and it could be a lot better. Stick at it.

[SwerveG]

Originally Posted by Riot

Feeding from listen:

Beat is nice, kind of got a U.K. twing to it.

Your flowing well over the beat, but your vocals are a little low.

Lyrics are nice, vocab. on lock as usual.

I think the hook needs work. There's no distinguishing between the verse and hook, so work on bringing it it and so people know what it is.

I like how you ended it, but your far from the worst emcee I've ever heard lol.

Overall it's not bad, little changes here and there and it could be a lot better. Stick at it.

thanks for not saying it's hot or it's dope. I appreciate the breakdown. and i'll keeps this in mind as i tweak the final mix.

[ForceFam]

That shit was dope hot.......... ha ha, nah, I didn't peep yet but I'm sure it won't disappoint. I'll drop my feed in a bit

[McKronikz]

its dope











personnaly im not feeling the beat....the way it switches doesnt sound clean to me....ur flow is def on point tho...near the end u really tear it up...im feeling ur verse but not the beat...id like to her that on a softer less futuristic/techno sounding beat...but maybe im just picky....keep it up man...lookin foward to ur next drop

[ForceFam]

It's not smooth at the first transition. Hook does need to stand out differently from the verses. Maybe an effect or something. Kinda gets lost, didn't know it kicked in till half way. I personally like the beat. Not the hottest, but enjoyable. I hate to piggy back with other's comments, but I feel the same way as Riot on this. It probably could use a re-record or some more mixing.... I guess.

Nice drop though. Everytime I hear people here, it makes me rip a few pages out my notebook and throw them away.

[SwerveG]

I uploaded a new version its the same link, could someone tell me if this is closer to where the song should be. btw if you any of you guys know anything about musical engineering could you give me some tips for mixing.

[Cell 2Dee]

Mixing - Just make sure nothing's clipping. Do you have the beat tracked out? If so, when you're mixing it down then have your pella playing, then slowly bring up the kicks volume, snares, hats, crashes around the vocals, making sure no element is drowning out another. Then bring up the other elements around them. Also, make sure the drums and the bassline are the main elements to the beat.

Feed - The lyrics are hot, but the flow seems choppy, as if you're reading off the page in parts. I mean, you kept on beat throughout, but it sounded uncomfortable if you know what I mean. Not a big fan of the beat, but that's a personal preference so don't take that in to account. Good drop, I always enjoy hearing your stuff.

[SwerveG]

Originally Posted by Cell 2Dee

Mixing - Just make sure nothing's clipping. Do you have the beat tracked out? If so, when you're mixing it down then have your pella playing, then slowly bring up the kicks volume, snares, hats, crashes around the vocals, making sure no element is drowning out another. Then bring up the other elements around them. Also, make sure the drums and the bassline are the main elements to the beat.

Feed - The lyrics are hot, but the flow seems choppy, as if you're reading off the page in parts. I mean, you kept on beat throughout, but it sounded uncomfortable if you know what I mean. Not a big fan of the beat, but that's a personal preference so don't take that in to account. Good drop, I always enjoy hearing your stuff.

I do know what you mean. I agree. The problem with the first part is that i mix the vocals that way ( two under toned panned vocals, and panned ad libs) but I don't make beats and these are just beats from other people, unless there is something i'm missing, I don't think i know how to do those things to a beat.

Edit: sorry just realized you said if i had the beat tracks

[ForceFam]

Much improved over the first one. Song is straight, has been. I'm guessing you're doing all the behind the scenes stuff with the track.